Show dont tell narrative openings

Sentence starting with the "show dont tell" sentences I made 

(sentence starter) She yelled over the top of her voice expressing her emotions

- As Sarah yelled over the top of her voice, she couldn't help but cry because of how shocking the news she had just received was. Finding out she had not made the cut, how could she not be upset. 

(sentence starter) She screamed with excitement while running up to him for a hug  

- She had been waiting and waiting for this day to come and it was finally here, she ran up to him with a big grin, and leaped into his arms while letting out a big scream. Finally being with him made all her stress flow away.

(sentence starter) The swan glided gently across as down below viewed a reflection of the bright blue sky

- Walking beside a big glossy lake, the sun and the fluffy clouds reflected off, as a graceful swan glided across. Hearing the birds chirp, and the trees sway, today is going to be a good day.